We’re getting there…

I think this is better. I’ve given up trying to get the definition clearer; HD in this version seems to be as good as it gets.

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Jane Dougherty

I used to do lots of things I didn't much enjoy. Now I am officially a writer. It's what I always wanted to be.

4 thoughts on “We’re getting there…”

  1. The images have a strong impact. The red on red writing evades the eye, could be a bit more contrasty. I like the changing movements of the images, up and down, but is there a fade-in-out facility, the change from writing to image is a little abrupt in places.

    1. The choice of colours for the text isn’t very big, and though I know the red doesn’t stand out too well against the dark red, the options are too bright and stark. It’s meant to be grim after all. I think you’re right about there being a fade-out function but I haven’t been able to get it right. I’ll have another fiddle with it. I’ve been so irritated by the loss of definition in the text when the film is uploaded to You Tube that I’ve rather lost sight of the other problems! Thanks for reminding me. 🙂

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