As morning glory creeps across the blasted tree
and bright flowers hide the ravages of rot,
as autumn vines drape cold tumbled stones
warming dead ruins with cascades of fire
and red poppies carpet the fields of muddy death
time will weave a heart of sorts
to replace the one I gave to you.
But though the passing weeks and months and years
will heal the wound and fill the empty space
with some sweet froth of trivia
that leaves no lingering taste upon the tongue
no pain, no deep-carved emotion in the gut
nothing will ever be the same again.
The world, my heart, the poppy-covered mud
all are changed utterly
and I mourn the stillbirth
of the beauty that could have been.
some writing just HAS to be shared,,, this is re-blogging material 🙂
If I can please just a few it makes it all worthwhile. Thanks Seumas 🙂
Reblogged this on Seumas Gallacher and commented:
some writing just HAS to be shared,,, this is from Jane Dougherty … lovely word-smithing…
Really beautiful
Thanks Diane.
Beautifully done. Thank you for sharing your gift with the world.
And thank you for the beautiful compliment.
Beautiful …. I really like the line “warming dead ruins with cascades of fire”
Thank you. I was thinking of wild clematis vines. They turn a deep crimson in the autumn, a really vibrant colour, and they climb over everything.
Wow.. we do not see such colors of the autumn here in my city, Kolkata like you do in yours. I will be looking forward to learning more about the colours of the various seasons through your lovely words..
The colours here change gradually, and usually in a muted way. That’s why some leaves and some plants look so dramatic. We don’t have the exotic lushness of India; the tones are softer.
I left a comment on Seumas’ blog too, this is beautiful Jane.
Laurie.
You know, Laurie, I get a real feeling of acheivement when you and the other kind bloggers leave this kind of comment. Who cares if you are the only ones to read what I write? It’s enough for me. Thanks for your support.
Thank you Jane. At the end of the day even if you only reach out to one person you have accomplished something.