100 word story: Enchanted swans

Photo: Swans on the Baie de Somme


She watches through the hole in the door, the swans settling on the lake and wonders what they look like in human form. She sighs, and her heart flutters like beating wings in her chest. Though dark clouds lower in the sky, no wind disturbs the sedge, and the snow white birds glide without fear on the still waters. Unlike her, they are not doomed to stay. Soon they will rise in a flurry of white feathers and scattered crystal water droplets, and she yearns to join them, borne on strong, broad wings beyond the pain of this mortal life.

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Jane Dougherty

I used to do lots of things I didn't much enjoy. Now I am officially a writer. It's what I always wanted to be.

17 thoughts on “100 word story: Enchanted swans”

      1. I’ve always thought that these gods of old were based on real people from a loooong time ago. A race of people who were different or perhaps more intelligent than the locals. If not that then some people were real sick puppies. ๐Ÿ™‚

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