Four short poems on a common theme.
Sorrow empties the world
of the vibrancy of colour,
dousing the sun’s fire,
washing greens and blues,
with an eternity of rain.
Once the earth moved for us,
the sun stood still,
and the moon and stars
swam in our eyes.
Now the ground trembles
with the violence
of the slamming door.
You made a vow beneath the stars,
That you would never leave.
Now I hold out empty hands,
To catch those stars and grieve.
Falling, they fade and die,
Falling, I wish that I could fly.
Stars fall,
the moon spins,
the sun cools,
the earth dies,
and in the cradle of the universe,
new galaxies are rocked
by soothing cosmic winds.
Four lovely poems Jane, enjoyed reading these xx
Thanks 🙂 I’m glad you enjoyed them. Date: Fri, 5 Feb 2016 11:40:35 +0000 To: jane.dougherty@dbmail.com
I love the common theme–life, death, joy, and sadness–eternal themes and eternity. I particularly liked: “and in the cradle of the universe,
new galaxies are rocked
by soothing cosmic winds.”
I find satisfaction in the idea that the universe is constantly renewing. We don’t count for anything in the universal scheme of things.
Date: Fri, 5 Feb 2016 13:03:12 +0000 To: jane.dougherty@dbmail.com
I find satisfaction in the idea that the universe is constantly renewing. We don’t count for anything in the universal scheme of things. Date: Fri, 5 Feb 2016 13:03:12 +0000 To: jane.dougherty@dbmail.com
I especially like the line ~ by soothing cosmic winds
This gives me an idea for a poem.
Oh good. I’m glad when a line inspires someone else 🙂 Date: Fri, 5 Feb 2016 15:01:03 +0000 To: jane.dougherty@dbmail.com
https://rivrvlogr.wordpress.com/2016/02/05/guiding-lights/
Very visual poems. I really enjoyed it!