Haiku challenge: Shiver & Friend

Haiku for Ronovan’s weekly prompt. Difficult one.


Photo ©Evelyn Simak


Friendly warmth falls soft

on the first leaf shivering

spring beauty unfolds.

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Jane Dougherty

I used to do lots of things I didn't much enjoy. Now I am officially a writer. It's what I always wanted to be.

8 thoughts on “Haiku challenge: Shiver & Friend”

    1. It took me ages. For some reason the word ‘friend’ just didn’t fit in. Maybe because haiku are supposed to be about the natural world and the idea of friendship seems so human. And we, of course, are not natural 🙂

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