Poetry challenge #32: Dreaming trees

This week I absolutely want to introduce the kyrielle form. It’s a lovely pattern with a last line refrain. Shadow Poetry explains the possible rhyme schemes. Since I didn’t want to abandon the picture prompt, I’ve made this a three in one. I hope you’ll try the kyrielle, but don’t feel obliged if you don’t take to it. There’s a painting and a handful of words if you’d rather do your own thing.

The painting is Russian (click on the image for details, it’s all in cyrillic script). It’s obviously a moonlit scene, but is it entirely peaceful? Some of the trees are perfectly straight and still, others appear to be moving. Where does the road lead? What does the artist know that the viewer doesn’t?

Try incorporating these words:

Moonlight, tread, wary, secret, swaying.

My example uses one of the permitted rhyme schemes. There are others. Post a link to your poem in the comments, and take your time. You have a whole week.

Dream walking

Where moonlight casts a trembling swathe,

In silver the swaying poplars bathe,

Dreams are walking through the night,

Trailing gossamer threads of light.

 

Night shadows drape the silent trees,

Fluttering leaves in gentle breeze,

I tread the secret paths starbright,

Trailing gossamer threads of light.

 

A glow suffuses bloom and stalk,

As light as thistledown I walk,

Too slow, you pass out of my sight,

Trailing gossamer threads of light.

 

Beyond the tranquil, moonlit brook,

Lost in shade the path you took,

Putting the wary deer to flight,

Trailing gossamer threads of light.

 

Beneath the midnight dreaming boughs,

Where barn owl calls and cold wind soughs,

Dawn breaks like sour, creeping blight,

Trailing gossamer threads of light.

 

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