Since most of you seemed to take great relish in seeing the devil in a pair of sweet-looking children, the devil is pushing me to test you with this one. On past performance, I’m not sure it’s a good idea…
We’ll keep the 200 word limit again this week.
Here’s the pic
Photo ©Jimmy Fell
I somehow don’t think you’ll need any words to go with this one, but if you do, how about
retribution
Please post the link to your story in the comments by Wednesday evening, say if you’d welcome a critical comment from me or anyone else who has one to give, and I’ll post a round up next Thursday. Happy writing!
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Great prompt, thank you. https://fmmewritespoems.wordpress.com/2016/06/24/microfiction-challenge-burning-angel
All comments welcomed, btw.
Empathy overload
https://rivrvlogr.wordpress.com/2016/06/24/burning-angel-microfiction-challenge-2/
And yes, comments welcome.
Oh yes, the nameless one would welcome comments. You invoked memories of one of my favourite creepy, suspenseful movies, the 1973 Wickerman (not the later Nicolas Cage version). Great prompt! I may have to reveal my name after all.
https://phylor.wordpress.com/2016/06/24/jds-microfiction-challenge-2-burning-angel-avenging-angel/
I haven’t seen the film, but I love Edward Woodward. I couldn’t bear it if he gets burned in the end.
https://summerstommy.com/2016/06/24/microfiction-challenge-2-burning-angel/
Well, I decided to have a go once again. I delight in your feedback! Thanks for welcoming me to your challenge. I may have to give a go at poetry next!
http://www.thejourneyofamillionmiles.com/?p=470
I think you should have a go at poetry. You’re half-way there already 🙂
Half-way is further than not at all! The words whirl about in my mind like a tornado, in prose I must correctly place them on a page. I think in poetry I could let them lay where they fall. We shall see!
In prose you certainly have to respect a lot more rules than in poetry!
I really enjoyed this prompt!
https://linesofshadeau.wordpress.com/2016/06/26/the-burning-angel/
Great! Hope you join in again next week 🙂
I’ll be looking for the prompt 🙂
It’s a great prompt! Here’s my take if the pingback doesn’t work: https://fantasyraconteur.wordpress.com/2016/06/27/beneath-the-flames/
Hi Jane, here’s my take…not sure if it has comeout well
https://srisudhak.wordpress.com/2016/06/27/retribution/
Hi Jane,
I was confused but am no longer…though I am sure it will return.
Here is the link to my contribution this week. http://engleson.ca/?page_id=7588
Confusion only happens to people who have many different things going on in their head at the same time. Count yourself lucky 🙂
https://methodtwomadness.wordpress.com/2016/06/28/junk-mail-art-retribution/
Hi Jane ,here’s my second take
https://srisudhak.wordpress.com/2016/06/29/its-holi/
Updated the round up. Great story of revenge. Loved it! I was intrigued as to how half a shirt stayed on the hanger, but the idea is so beautiful, I can suspend disbelief 🙂