Where were you when the night caught fire,
and the stars shredded silver filings on the blazing wind?
Why did my hand catch at empty air
and loose feathers, museum-dull,
instead of the comet’s tail?
I think I saw you sauntering by the river,
whistling low a tune we used to share,
your hands full of moonbeams
to offer to someone else.
Where did it go, the cool, green love,
Slip-sliding through sun-slanting beams of summer?
Did it follow the last of the geese fleeing the ice floes
Or sink, a trunk of treasure trove, beneath cold waves?
Beyond the lament, the final hissing sparks,
of falling fireworks,
I thought I heard a blackbird sing,
Or perhaps it was the fading strings
of a romantic film,
the flickering screen I cannot see
through this veil of tears.
Awwwwww. So beautiful, yet so sad.
Thank you! We always see our little problems on an apocalyptic scale, don’t we?
Indeed.
Such beautiful longing.
I find the moment we associate our personal longings with natural phenomena, the result is such deep emotion it seems boundless.
The bird references caught me, the analogy of beauty and wildness and flying away from you. I especially loved the image of grasping for your love and catching only empty air and loose feathers.
Thank you! Birds give us so much gorgeous imagery. I’m glad you liked it 🙂
Lovely-a powerful expression of feelings of loss.
Thank you 🙂
Oh my! This was stunning, Jane.
I’m glad you like it, Merril. It’s one of those poems that grew from a first line that I let carry me away 🙂
It carried me away, as well!
Where was I when the night caught fire?
Alone as always I am alone,
Waiting for a wave of compassion or science,
Of fiction or poetry, Of well baked pies,
Where was I when the night caught fire?
Trembling on the floor, angry and hurt,
Disbelieving that yet again you left me
Without looking back. So I stood on the porch,
Watching the blaze from dead stars as their
Ashes reigned down and buried those
Without umbrellas to protect them.
I waited that night for someone to notice,
For parent, child, friend, but the silence burned
Through any preconception I had of friendship.
Where was I when the night caught fire?
Writing oceans of water to extinguish the flames.
Reposted on my site.
Thank you 🙂
I read this in my lunch break today and had to read it again and again. So powerful, so moving. Thank you!
Thank you, Damien! I’m so pleased you liked this one 🙂
Impossible not to!
😉
So lush and visual. Wowed by these lines:
and loose feathers, museum-dull,
instead of the comet’s tail
🙂
Thank you! It’s one of those Expressionist painting type poems 🙂