Haiku challenge: Spin & Water

For Ronovan’s weekly haiku challenge. First of 2017.

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1024px-whirlpool

Imperceptibly,

earth spins, while river pools whirl,

space-dancing water.

 

Edited to add a second one.

 

Leaf spinning slowly,

caught by the racing river,

white water sailing.

 

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Jane Dougherty

I used to do lots of things I didn't much enjoy. Now I am officially a writer. It's what I always wanted to be.

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