This is for the Secret Keeper’s writing prompt. I might write a second poem. I like these words.
OPEN| ROCK| RING | ACT | LETTER
The final act,
your letter falls on the mat,
no ringing bells or madly blaring sirens,
just a dull swish,
like the dangling rope cut,
swinging in the wind.
Hands tremble too much to open neatly,
white envelope paper ripped across,
the inked, deadly precise letters, a massacre.
I skim the words,
as if the lightness of the glance gives them less weight,
no time to stick their full import on reluctant retinas.
I skim, slide, eyes glide,
avoid the harsh black-on-white truth.
I skim,
the words shout though I close my eyes.
Skim, I say—
the stone bounces,
once, twice, thrice,
and hope drops,
sinks out of sight,
into the darkness,
where fall and fade,
all lovers’ broken hearts.
“all lovers’ broken hearts.”
Mine is one of them. Thanks for the poem. 🙂
I’m sorry. You can get it back. It doesn’t have to be gone forever. I know.
Lovely poem – what a talent! Thank you, Jane 🙂
Thank you, Fran 🙂 I might try a more ‘poetic’ version.
Powerful poem–a story in a few words.
I like these words, too–and the Vermeer. I may have to borrow it. 😉
Thank you! You know where to find it…
😉
Vermeer would have been honoured!
Vermeer might have known the woman in question 🙂
“no time to stick their full import on reluctant retinas…” – I like that a lot…
Wonderful, Jane.
Thanks Sarah 🙂