Could you sing a song,
of how day is long
and the night so sweet?
Could you take me where
the golden air
and the breakers meet?
Say you can, you will,
and I’ll love you still,
though you’re far away.
Say, one day of mist,
with the dawnlight kissed,
you’ll be back to stay.
The last 3 lines Jane beautiful wonderful…
Thank you, Sangbad 🙂 I wrote a ton of these short poems yesterday. Must have been the weather 🙂
Weather affecting us all it seems…like my poems are gloomy sad these days…
If you weren’t affected by externals, you wouldn’t be a sensitive writer 🙂
H’m…I agree…read my recent whenever you get a chance…will like to know your reviews….
I will 🙂
Inspiring.
Thank you
Thank you! I’m pleased you enjoyed the poem 🙂
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Really beautiful, Jane. Thank you.
I’m so pleased you like it, Robbie 🙂
Lovely, Jane. 🙂
Thanks Merril 🙂
Where the golden air and the breakers meet…I’d like to go there myself. (K)
If I find the way I’ll let you know 🙂