Shadorma November: Ebb tide

Day Two of Eliot’s Shadorma challenge.


Storm tide ebbs,

in pools abandoned,

wreckage lies,

yours and mine,

our dreams, rudderless, adrift

in silver moonlight.

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Jane Dougherty

I used to do lots of things I didn't much enjoy. Now I am officially a writer. It's what I always wanted to be.

14 thoughts on “Shadorma November: Ebb tide”

  1. like the use of the silver moonlight usually seen in the sentimental poetry of the heart. done a splendid job using the form to express the life consequences of going off the rails (to use another metaphor).

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