Haiku: Barely spring 2

Another haiku for Frank Tassone’s ‘Barely Spring’ haikai challenge. Not sure if this is a true haiku. My grasp on the rules is fading.

 

Sky full of pale sun

misted ice crystals—listen,

warm life stirs.

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Jane Dougherty

I used to do lots of things I didn't much enjoy. Now I am officially a writer. It's what I always wanted to be.

23 thoughts on “Haiku: Barely spring 2”

      1. I understood your last explanation and that helped enormously. There’s been a lot of water under the bridge since I read it though and I’d forgotten half of it. Thanks for the reminder 🙂

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