I’ve thought carefully about this NaPoWriMo prompt, about what I can learn from the future me, and I’ve come to the conclusion that there’s nothing. The future isn’t real. It doesn’t exist. Not yet. And when it does, it will be ‘now’.
On a hill, I’ll be,
somewhere ahead, so far,
misted with cloud and mornings.
Alone, I’ll be,
for we are always alone, but not lonely—
the misted air is your whispered breath,
and I’ll touch your hand in every grass stalk.
That’s what I say,
but the future me, is the same me,
just a little further down the line.
Perhaps there will be no hill,
just the same hole dug deeper,
the same echoing reproaches and fears
a little hollower.
Point is, the future isn’t.
All is here, now,
in the misty mornings,
on this grassy hillside
with you.
I consider this a love poem. A lovely love poem. ❤
(This may be sacrilegious, but I think these would be wonderful lyrics for a song, also.)
Thank you! It is a love poem really. I tried to think about the future and it wasn’t there. But now is 🙂
You just gave me goose bumps. xo
🙂
Now is definitely here 🙂 I’m reminded of something I wrote quite some time ago about how when the sun is a certain way, your shadow is in front of you and its body is in your future, but as soon as you put your real foot down, you’re in today!
And I like how you moved it into a love poem.
That’s exactly it, Lillian. We take today with us into tomorrow, like it or not! And of course we hope we’ll have the ones we love with us still 🙂
Very nice Jane. Much more poetic than my snarky take, but we are basically on the same page. All I know is now!
https://katmyrman.com/2018/04/11/future-self-napowrimo-2018-day-11/
Dead right 🙂
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Thanks For reblogging, Michael 🙂
Wonderful. In reality you only have to dig deep enough, and with all the dirt you can build a big hill. 😉 Have a good time. Michael
That is so true! I hadn’t thought of it like that, but it somehow means that whatever is ahead, it has to be good. Provided we live long enough…
Well put. (K)
Thank you!