Book almost finished. I’m in the final phase—110, 000 words, and I’m taking a rest before the final push. The Oracle seems to be telling me to get outside and relax a bit.
This day cloud-sails,
flying slow
from morning into night.
I am a prisoner of peace,
of the grass god, the starry dark
of the vast, throbbing universe.
I haunt green places,
drink from cool springs,
see stars wake in the sky
above my head.
Flower-soft, fire-heart,
I laugh with the joy
of dancing trees.
Congratulations! You are really zipping along.
The Oracle gave you some nice ones today. Laughing with joy at dancing trees seems perfect. 🙂
I had clouds today, too.
It’s fitting all the people in at the end in the right order that’s fiddly. I’ll zip along to your place right away 🙂
Oh, you’ll get the fiddliness fiddled, I’m sure. 🙂
This fabulous, Jane your poetry leaves me in awe 💜
It’s the Oracle. I just translate or transmit or whatever 🙂
You are too modest
Congratulations Jane! Now its really time for a rest. Its a very relaxing poem too. Thank you so much, and have a great weekend. Michael
Thanks! You too, Michael, but I’m going to finish it tonight. Can’t stop here!
I understand, Jane! You are a workaholic too, and only go to bed when its finished. Hope you have enough coffee “on board”? 😉 Michael
Nope. Don’t much like it. I’ll just keep going until the ideas start to get muddled. It isn’t as though I’ll be shot at dawn if I don’t finish tonight 🙂
OK, wish you all the best.😊
Thanks! Finished it this morning!
These are happy. How can you be sad when the trees are dancing? (K)
It’s hard 🙂
The phrase ‘grass god’ reminds me of the movie Moana. I wonder if you know it. Do you dislike only disneyland or anything disney? (including the princesses?)
I don’t know Moana. Not very clued up on films at all. I hate the Disney concept ie take a perfectly good story and trash it.
Haha, what are you talking about? All the classic tales from disney, I am a big fan! Either way you should see Moana, one of the most inspiring, liberating movie, and too with a strong female lead. Nothing to not love, with Alessia cara and Dwayne Johnson’s singing!
Never heard of either of them 🙂 Singing?
It is a musical! Now don’t tell me you are against musicals too! Watched les miserables?
Nope, but I haven’t read it either. I’m not a fan of musicals.
Who is not a fan of musicals? It’s basically poetry with a melancholic Music and a vague story!
Me.
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