For the dverse open link night, at Kim’s suggestion, a geese poem
Did you see the geese, the arrow pointing north,
the kith and kin with their invisible bonds?
Did you hear the sound, the joyous deep-voiced song,
of sky sailors, plying oars that plough the clouds,
and in the night, set their course by the stars?
Such strength, such fortitude that carries them
the breadth of the earth and back again.
Would you follow me through the Arctic night
should I gather up my wings and fly away?
Would you call, the wind in your face,
and ask me to wait, while the cold sun sets,
and the ice glitters in the pinions of our wings?
And do I dare risk all, happiness and sorrow,
and throw in my lot with the wild north wind?
Beautiful piece of poetry 🙂 great images! I love this one!
Thanks, Issa 🙂 I’m very fond of geese.
Very welcome! Keep up the good work 🙂 how is it going with the literary agent by the way?
I will 🙂 The agent is beavering away sending the ms out to big publishers, as a good agent should. I hope there’ll be good news soon.
That’s great 🙂 wish it will come soon for you as well!
So do I! You can’t imagine how much!
Haha I can’t but hope I will be in the same position one day 😀 then I can tell you what it is like
I hope you get there quicker than I have! It just takes self-confidence. I ought to have tried seriously years ago, but I wasn’t a good writer years ago so… You’ll do it, I’m sure 🙂
All in good time. Time is the whetstone on which writers sharpen their quills 😉 I will do what I can to make it happen.
Best approach. Don’t poop too soon 🙂
Thank you for the encouragements!
My pleasure 🙂
What a great description of the geese: “sky sailors, plying oars that plough the clouds.” Lovely through and through.
Thank you, Linda. I’m in awe of geese and the way they organise their migrations.
I agree–beautiful line!
Thank you!
Thank you for writing a geese poem, Jane! I love the way it captures that moment when you spot the ‘arrow pointing north’ and the ‘ joyous deep-voiced song, / of sky sailors, plying oars that plough the clouds’. The wordplay in that phrase is perfect, as is the imagery in the Arctic night, the ice glittering in the pinions of wings, and the wild north wind.
Thanks Kim. I’m in a Nordic mood at the moment 🙂
Geese are wonderful. You have choosen a very nice image and woven a great poem around. Thank you, Jane!
I’m pleased you like it, Michael 🙂
Yes Jane, its “harmonizing” my world. Michael
🙂
Damn, Jane. Wordsworth couldn’t have done it better.
That’s quite a compliment! I don’t know what to say except, I’d never dare write a poem about daffodils 🙂
Hahahaha. Why don’t u pick another flower?
There’s quite a choice, I admit 🙂
I would throw in my lot with the North Wind right now !
I think I probably would too 🙂
I think most of us would right now🙃
It’s going to be hot where you are today, I think.
It certainly it is , we are at 25c at 10am and climbing 💜
It’s 27° here and I’ve just changed into something warmer—I’m cold! After 39° yesterday it feels quite nippy 🙂
Phew it is maddness where is all this hot weather comming from, as if we didn’t know !🙃
Weather? What weather?
🌹🌹💜
“sky sailors, plying oars that plough the clouds” Love this 💕 such stunning imagery here 😊
Thank you, Sanaa 🙂
Nice description: “joyous deep-voiced song,
of sky sailors”
Thanks Frank 🙂 The wild geese are tremendous birds.
Lovely poem.
Thank you, Imelda 🙂
love the would you’s
Thank you, Tim 🙂
I love the use of questions in this poem, the passing of the geese is marvelous
Thank you! There are no words as wonderful as that sight.
You’ve written one of the most beautiful poems I’ve ever read on this blog.
Thank you, Petru. I’m pleased you like it. Things have been very fraught here for lots of reasons, and emotions were running high when I wrote it.
Sorry to hear that. I wrote for the same reason last night.
It all comes down to money and the lack of it. It’s all very well getting poetical about the stars and the birdsong, but the bills have to be paid even when you live in a ruin in the countryside.
I know the theme very, very, very well!! So much I would like to do, work-related mainly, and just can’t. It hurts.
It gets wearisome when you go from struggling student to struggling poorly paid worker to struggling parent, and now struggling to keep everyone, us and the unemployed and still in education children with our heads above water. We went wrong somewhere when it came to professional decisions.
Laughing! Your books will sell by the million and you’ll all be very comfy. Holding thumbs.
I wish! I read an article yesterday that really put the dampers on my enthusiasm—about the usual advance paid for a book by a big publisher. Between $5000 and 12000. Before tax. Before agent’s percentage. I’m not going to start booking round the world cruises on that. Not that I would (you can probably guess) but a refit for this house would have been nice.
I suppose it’s wise to stay sober about one’s expectations. But what if it gets translated into Chinese? Billions of readers right there! Happened to a South African writer also now living in France, not sure which part. Even so, she had expectations of driving a Porsche through the streets of Paris when she turned sixty but the university costs of the children proved too prohibitive! But living comfortably. That was this year. I read an article about her online somewhere the other day.
The longer the process takes, the less likely I think it’s going to happen. I’m trying not to think about it at all.
Wonderful poem, Jane–so full of emotion and questions.
I’m fond of watching the geese, too.
It’s a powerful sight. I find it hard not to get emotional watching it.
I think this is my old time favorite of your’s!!!
I’m glad this one struck so many chords. The wild geese image is such a strong one, it’s hard not to be impressed by such wonderful birds.
Ooh, I like those images of geese wading through the sky.
-HA
Geese are wonderful birds 🙂
You find love everywhere…this one is very passionate. (K)
It is everywhere, and we all have it in us.