The OctPoWriMo prompt is about things split in two, the parting of ways. Nothing more appropriate than a cleave poem. Dedicated to a special person.
I remember how we longed when you slammed doors
For the day to come the shouting at its peak
When you would decide it was time to change
To finally go, make your own life
And let us breathe. You took your courage
In both hands, you clutched your dreams
Fistfuls of anger let them open with broad wings
Such energy let fly carried on the wind
An avalanche of regrets into the great blue future
Would things have been fanned into wild flames
Better than this cold fury and blossomed
Had we shared our hearts with their passions unfolded
Some decisions work for better or worse. Nicely expressed 🙂
Thank you 🙂 In the end it turned out for the best, and we’re wishing we could have them all back with us again. Maybe not permanently though…
i love this split. well written
Thank you!
Very well written indeed.
Thank you!
You’re on a roll with the cleaves. It seems a perfect form to describe those years. 🙂
Much better than a riddle. There’s no riddle about this one 🙂
I love this it works well on all three levels. Is it about a child ? 💜
Right in one 🙂
Been there 💜💜
🙂
Love the question marks beneath the words
Thank you, Sam 🙂
Wow, beautifully penned!❤
Thank you!
And then sometimes they return…(the same, but different) (K)
Ours seem subtly different every time we see them.
From day to day, always.