Haiku challenge: Magic & Man

I think this might be a senryu. Not a haiku anyway. For Ronovan’s weekly prompt.


once we had magic

awe and wonder filled our lives

now we have shopping

Published by

Jane Dougherty

I used to do lots of things I didn't much enjoy. Now I am officially a writer. It's what I always wanted to be.

31 thoughts on “Haiku challenge: Magic & Man”

  1. I just skimmed through a book that tried to say this in 300 pages. My thought was that a short essay would have been better and much more effective, but you’ve nailed it in 3 lines. (K)

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s