These first pale golden days announce the spring,
the swelling of the buds and then the song
of birds and water running from the source.
A sunrise crisp brings deer up to the source
to drink, where clustered violets frame the spring
that courses through the grass with silver song
down to the willow-shaded stream. The song
That stirs the shoots and roots lies at the source
Of all this golden frothing that is spring.
All this golden spring, song is the source.
I like this one 💜
Thank you! The form is a bit of a strange one, but it’s fun to play around with.
You seem to have it sorted 😃
I’m working on it 🙂
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I like especially the final line. (K)
Thank you! This is a strange poetry form but it has a sort of hypnotic effect.