For the NaPoWriMo prompt, with apologies to Shakespeare and thanks for the loan of Sonnet 94.
I’ll not compare you to an evening sky,
Shot full of rainbows melting with the light,
A shadow only in the mem’ry’s eye,
When all is swallowed by the hungry night.
High praises are not what your ego lacks,
Your self-opinion soars with eagle’s wings,
Oblivious to any flaws and cracks,
A drab it preens, and as the peacock sings.
To compare you thus is hardly fair to birds,
Birdsong is sweet to hear and full of grace,
Unlike the fatuous flow of hollow words
From that blowhole in the middle of your face.
Give me a simple posy and staunch deeds;
Lilies that fester smell far worse than weeds.
That last line got me… festering Lilies are rank. Cool poem, well done xx
Yeah, that last line is the one Shakespeare wrote…
This made me laugh. It’s such a Jane version of Shakespeare. Probably what his wife told him. 🙂
This the polite version with the hole in his face…
Hahaha.
Well, this is perfect. I have nothing more to say. When you write like this, I am floored (in a good way, I am meaning). And laughing. Fantastic.
Thank you. It turned out well, and I managed to get a laugh out of it without resorting to vulgarity 🙂
Still on your high horse…and for good reason. Shakespeare is well suited to puncturing the over-inflated. (K)
He is, and it seems to cut that much deeper when the put down is polite and rhymed.
Well done!
Thanks!
Oh, just great! 🙂
Thanks! I was pleased with this one 🙂