For Colleen’s weekly Tanka Tuesday challenge. A butterfly cinquain.
Graceful
the trees’ wind dance
swallows’ wild dart and swoop
even the lane’s pale sinuous
winding
as it meanders in dappled
shade away from the town’s
unsightly squat
grey sprawl.
I love your descriptions. And, yes… I goofed again! The submission email is: tankatuesdaypoetry@gmail.com. I was caught doing too many things at once. Some days I give up! LOL! ❤
Thank you! You don’t want me to resend it do you? Does it make it easier if they’re all in the same place?
Yes, please. I can’t believe I did that. I’m so sorry for your trouble. ❤
Will do 🙂
❤
a good use of contrast both in words and form (K)
Thank you.
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