For Sue Vincent’s weekly photo prompt. Moving onto another WIP.
The cold hit him as soon as he broke through the saplings at the edge of the copse. If he hadn’t been running so hard, he would have noticed it earlier. If he hadn’t been so afraid of being caught, he’d have noticed the change in the light too. He hurtled into the open; what should have been a field on an autumn afternoon, now seemed full of shadows. He stopped, his breath heaving, the only sound the blood pounding in his ears and the crackle of frozen grass beneath his feet.
He listened, despite the strangeness, the fear of his pursuers stronger than the evidence of his senses. Nothing. Not even a dog barking. Not even the faint rumble of traffic on the main road that passed through the small town as the bottom of the valley. He flung himself around, wild-eyed now, his feet cracking the ice that had formed along a sinuous path that led…he had no idea. He stumbled forward, aimlessly, teeth chattering with the cold, heading for the shadows he imagined to be the hedge at the field’s edge.
His breath made clouds in front of his face, misting his vision, his feet slipped over the same misty hoarfrost, until the shadowy line at the edge of sight towered over his head. By the faint light of the stars he saw he was standing beneath the eaves of a forest. It was cold as feck, and he had no idea where he was.
Well done Jane, very beautiful
Thank you! I’m just getting back into this story.
It’s great, enjoyed!
I’m pleased 🙂
😊
A great snippet full of tension, Jane. I definitely wanted more.
Thank you, Diane. I hope to be able to tease the right story out of this.
There is a great moving in it. Love it! Michael
Thank you! I’ll have to try to keep the pace going.
:-))
Lost. In every sense of it. (K)
I hope it doesn’t turn out to be too knotty, this plot…
I absolutely love this Jane I want MORE!
I’m trying! Only just started it.
Well give it your full attention I am hanging by a frayed piece of string 💜💜
Right, boss 🙂
🙃
This really pulls you into his story…
I’m glad you think so. I’m easing myself back into this one.
Waiting for more here 😉
It’s coming along slowly. I’m still revising up to the point where I left off a couple of years ago.
Glad to see you taking it up again.
I like the idea. It would be a shame to let it go to waste.
I have a few of those lurking too.
Don’t lose them!
I won’t 😉