For dverse. I half-closed my eyes, thought, Gothic, and got this.
Pour me a cup,
rain the sharp-thorned feast on my head,
run, pounding the blood red sand with burning feet;
I will match you draught for draught,
hand for hand.
Trees bend and bow,
breaking,
report echoes, bleeding sap into the slime
where furred things drown open-mouthed,
and the toothed and clawed
drag broken limbs deeper,
where the gold lies cold and rotting-wrapped,
beetled,
in the eyeless end of all things,
all time and the dust of dead worlds—
worms shrink at its touch.
It comes for us;
I hear the hot suction of its breath,
the pawing of moist palms.
Pour me a cup and tangle your arms
with mine, your tongue, and taste the fire
one last time
before the dark.
Different. And beautiful.
Cheers. I enjoy writing in freefall sometimes.
eerie you captured the gothic style with slime, rot and worms … and addressing death!
Present mood isn’t cheery, obviously!
sorry for that, wet here but I’m smiling 🙂
🙂
Oh my yes, spine tingles. I hate the anticipation of a possible ill fate, close by and approaching. This was captivating Jane.
Thank you, Rob 🙂
You wrote all this with half-closed eyes, haha! Exquisite, dark images that just keep getting darker as we read on, even the furry things are downing open-mouthed, yikes! 😱 Your writing style is always so distinct, I enjoyed the ride here!
I’m glad you liked this! I enjoy letting the images make their own strange way. As long as they make a cohesive picture it’s fine by me.
yes, it’s always fun to see where the imagination takes us!
🙂
Fabulous, Jane. I love the two stories in one theme (the end of things and pouring a cup). I love it. 💖👍☕☕
Thanks Suzette. I let it work itself out. Sometimes it’s rewarding!
Indeed. Great poem👍
🙂
Dark and gripping with all the senses reeling. Fabulous write Jane.
Thanks Grace. I’m pleased you like this, drift writing.
This is intense! So good!
Thank you!
A wine-dark poem! I like where the Gothic muse took you, Jane.
Thanks Ingrid. I was quite pleased with this one 🙂
Unreal. I’d say that I wish I wrote these lines, but they never would have come to me.
I love these in particular:
-David
Thank you 🙂 We have mice (and two cats but never mind) and regularly if there’s any water left in the sink at night they slip in and drown. It’s so sad.
I think this could be a prologue to one of your stories of ancient myths!
It would be a bloody myth, but then most of the ancient myths are pretty unpleasant.
😀
The eyeless end of all things…it’s right there, beyond the reach of the firelight…(k)
It is, whatever some people like to set their hopes on.
True It’s A lot Like
So Many
Different
Religions
With Different
Names For God
No Matter
How Many
Tales The
Dog Has
The
Wag
Is Love
With
No
Words
At All
Yes
Dog
Is Love….
Dogs
generosity
with a tail.
Tails
With
No Lies…
Unleash
the wild
and unquestioning
love.
Furry Does See
As Wings Breathe…
and fly
with the wind
in their paws
CaPTuRinG
NoW EternAlly
Breath Free Flow
Gull Spiraling Sun
Gull dogs
have wings.
Dogma Barks
Excludes Free
Ewwwwwww! Something wicked this way comes! Great write.
It’s coming for all of us, Bev. Make sure you have some fun first 🙂
Sounds a little bit like the description of a sado-masochistic happening. Very interesting, indeed.
It could be, you’re right! Or just people having fun (or not) before a bitter end 🙂
Thats true! Sarcasm is always included in the boxed present, called life. 😉
Exactly 🙂