Frank Tassone has set a big catch-up challenge. Ten prompts in one. In order they are:
scarecrow
sea bass
Samhain
Veteran’s day
indian summer
Thanksgiving
beaver moon
witherind wind
Hanukkah
winter solstice
My response in the same order:
in the lonely field
arms reach out a perch a plea
wary crows pass by
pool bright
the silver fish turns about
a wish in his mouth
this night lit by fire
to summon and sooth the lost
the dark year begins
memories of those
we never knew—beneath rich
earth the bones sink
sun-fire lingers
at leaves’ edge as if the dark
will never come
when all is ripe
and fallen buds hatch
ready to begin again
across the face
milk-pale soft wings sweep
an owl caress
cold east roars
in the ears of the trees
last leaves ripped away
more lights lit
in the dark of the year
dance among shadows
in balance
with this dark the hope
in light’s return
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#Haiku Happenings #2: Jane Dougherty’s latest haiku #sequence for my current #Haikai Challenge!
Thank you, Frank 🙂
My pleasure, Jane! Thank you for the tremendous sequence! 🙂
I rarely write haiku. I’ve missed o-your challenges. Glad you’re back 🙂
FUN!
-David
Why not join in? It’s free 🙂
You’re so good at this, Jane. I can’t pick the best one. They are all beautiful.
Thank you. I can’t get excited about the haiku as a form unless there’s a whole flock of them together. They make something then.
So I’ve noticed.
These are beautiful, Jane. So many lovely images. I like the wish in the mouth of the sea bass, but really all of them. 😀
Thanks 🙂 A single haiku isn’t much fun, but lots of them together make a sort of disjointed poem.
Yes, you’re right! 😀
Excellent!
I’m pleased you think so 🙂
🌺🐠🐞🦋💖
Excellent. Beautifully crafted haiku, Jane
Thank you, Suzette 🙂
I too like the fish wish, but also the bone memories. Together, much more impact than one alone would be. (K)
All you can do with a single haiku is create an image. Good, as far as it goes.
Wow! Its a poem for also remembering the different tasks, at least a form of masterpiece. 😉
It’s a string of small images. I’m pleased you liked the effect 🙂
Well solved, Jane! Thank you for sharing!
My pleasure!
Thank you, Jane! 🙂
beautiful ripples in the ice of seasons
Thanks Lisa 🙂
You’re welcome.
🙂