Something was born
in the flushed light of this morning
embraced the listening secret
that need never speak
fish-mute and as silver
moon-shining soft as first feathers.
Would we could we
make home in this woven grass nest
too big and damp for birds
with windows onto the slow painting
of landscapes tree-bowing
to the wind’s rhythmic urgings?
I remember times before
where ghosts walk now
they whisper
dance upon the green grass
dance away the dark into day.
Life and joy are not supine peaceful pleasures
but fierce as oceans wild as open skies
demanding as the voice of a newborn child.
I am posting the Oracle’s message to earthweal’s open link.
This rises to a crescendo of hope in the final stanza – the Oracle has a strong message today! 🌊
I thought so too. She isn’t always so upbeat! Thank you 🙂
The opening stanza stands as a poem on its own, Jane – I love the way you describe morning light! I also enjoyed the thought of ‘windows onto the slow painting of landscapes’. New life is exciting and so welcome.
Thanks, Kim. The wind is still unsettling, but that’s what we expect at this time of year. I really feel the change now.
Awakening, the title really suits here
Literally and figuratively!
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Wonderful — I especially love “fish-mute and as silver”
Thank you 🙂 Fish are good symbols, and they know how to keep a secret.
Indeed they do!
Once again your message from the Oracle expands and enlarges mine. I love the last stanza especially. (K)
I’ve just read your poem, and made a similar sort of comment. Thank you for painting that landscape that links both poems.
It does! The Oracle likes anything inspired by Redon.
🙂
I especially love the last stanza ❤️
Thank you 🙂 The Oracle always has some emphatic comment to make.
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Oh my! This is gorgeous! Sigh.
I think yours begins where mine ends. 😀
Yes, you’re right! I hadn’t noticed that but it does follow on from your ‘reborn’.
I know! Isn’t that funny? 😀
It is, and then again…
Yes. 😀
The birth in the first section and the baby at the end grow and demand, in whispering and then louder voices. It’s good, good, this awakening.
It’s all about birth and death, isn’t it? Everything.
Oh, this is beautiful. So uplifting. Made my morning.
Thank you, Sherry 🙂 It’s always pleasant when the Oracle has a hopeful message.
Robert Graves says it wasn’t poetry unless dazed worshippers circled the fire chanting, “Kill, Kill, Kill.” Certainly the force of what truly is is no “peaceful supine pleasure.” Winter gales aren’t for sure. Curious, who’s the Oracle? One of the voices you channel? -B
Is that from The White Goddess?
No, gales are anything but peaceful.
The Oracle is the entity behind the fridge magnets. A few of us have noticed a similarity in the poems we get from using the magnets and it can only be because someone is shoving us in the same direction, can’t it?
Here’s the link. The word pool is very limited and limiting if you only use the words proposed. Use them as a springboard though and they can be inspriring.
http://play.magneticpoetry.com/poem/Original/kit/
Yep, White Goddess. The Oracle must have been whispering in my ear through your poem as I turned my thoughts to the next weekly challenge. B
Is this it?
The scene was probably in my mind when I wrote this, but it’s a literal birth (Ariadne’s) that I have literally just finished writing. Took a break from it (to wipe away the sweat etc) and opened your poem. Bingo.
Right! Obviously looking forward to reading it. Smiles.
I’ve written so many novels now that no one wants to publish, I’ve given up hope that ‘this’ will be the one that breaks the curse. You can read it though whether I get a publisher or not 🙂
Thanks!!
So nice! One sees where one is at. The different interpretations this evoked reminds one why one bothers to put things out there.
There are always so many facets to truth. We need to remember that. No story should be taken at face value; all interpretations can be valid.
Yes.