Crossing the line

Last week’s Earthweal prompt was Otherworld. I never got around to it, so I’ve written one now, late. The painting is by JMW Turner.

There are places and people and times that we miss,
places to linger and people to kiss,
and the magic of moments beneath sky’s blue dome.

There are veils and deep shadows, bright sun on the waves,
hands held in comfort, the soft word that saves,
and on the white strand we’ll dance in the foam.

We’ll dance in the foam with the wind in our hair,
and the call of the gulls will draw our feet where
gold light falls through boughs sprung from generous loam.

I’ll walk with my shadows beneath the bright sun,
and walk through the sunset when my day is done,
in the palm of earth’s hand, when she gathers me home.

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Jane Dougherty

I used to do lots of things I didn't much enjoy. Now I am officially a writer. It's what I always wanted to be.

19 thoughts on “Crossing the line”

  1. This is a beautiful poem, Jane, one that needs ethereal music to accompany it, help it cross the line from poetry to song. You have captured otherworldliness, especially in the lines:
    ‘We’ll dance in the foam with the wind in our hair,
    and the call of the gulls will draw our feet where
    gold light falls through boughs sprung from generous loam.’
    The final stanza is comforting and heart-warming.

  2. It’s a good prompt whenever. Your poem is lovely! And the Turner is perfect.
    The dance in the foam made me think of that painting we’ve both used before of the fully dressed couple standing in the waves.

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