A selection of words for anyone looking for a Sunday prompt. My poem follows.


Galloping
Sun rises in the silence
like the tolling of a bell,
rolling over stricken treetops,
not golden fall but the fall
of godlike things, charred and dead.
Once, there were swamps and giant reptiles here,
now dead frogs litter the lane,
feathers drift in dry ditches
where cats crouch,
their eyes narrow slits, distant.
The story fills a thousand books,
how it was, is now and will be.
Fish still glint in dwindling pools,
too many float in the liquid heat.
Soon the rifles will sound again,
the cracks in the armour widen,
and I fear we will follow the echoes
of the last flying hooves.
Standing on the edge of this moment
with the internal clamour
of jangled connections
I search the trees, oaks still green.
Blackbirds.
I love the story poem and the gorgeous painting.
Thanks Willow 🙂 I should try to pick out just a few words. Maybe I’d get a more concise poem.
No this one was perfect 💜
Thank you xxx I’m pleased you think so.
I do
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Time in layers. Sometimes the veil is thin.
I will, as usual, keep the words in mind this week.
Time seems to have stopped. Still too hot and dry, still have a migraine…
It does seem the world is suspended. In many ways.
The positive things just aren’t happening, while the negative destructive actions are running away.
I was thinking about time. . .
you got an epic and the image is perfect.
My poem is dark and cynical. I’m not sure if I’ll post it.
I like this painting too. On the face of it, it’s peaceful, but there is a bit of black in it, and those wisps of white make me think of smoke.
I don’t post everything either. There are poems I keep for me, just because. Maybe I’ll get around to making another booklet one day.
Yes, you’re right. But the smoke could be peaceful or not, too.
Yes, there are definitely poems I don’t post because I want to submit them or save them for something else. Not this one though, I don’t think. 😏
You’ve intrigued me now. I want to read it.
Maybe I’ll work on it and post. 🙂
🙂
Your poem has so much in it – threat and beauty, fear and calm. THe ending – the blackbirds – feel like a great relief. It is very evocative – fabulous descriptions.
I’m pleased the blackbirds came as a relief. It’s hard to feel everything is terrible while there are still blackbirds.
As always, the Oracle sees the world as it is, not how we wish it was. (K)
That’s a dark one, despite the fiery images at the end. Nightmarish.
Nightmarish is the state of the world.
I just feel like crying a lot of the time.