A quadrille for dverse.

The hare
At the meadow’s edge I saw, where
the trees make shadows green,
pressed in the grass a form, hare
left showed where he had been.
The morning quiet’s broken,
by gunshot, eager sounds
of hunters’ sharp words spoken
and the belling of their hounds.
and the whole poem.
The hare
At the meadow’s edge I saw, where
the trees make shadows green,
pressed in the grass a form, hare
left showed where he had been.
The morning quiet’s broken,
by gunshot, eager sounds
of hunters’ sharp words spoken
and the belling of their hounds.
Are they looking for the wild thing
that rested by the hedge,
where the blackbirds and the thrush sing,
and the breeze sighs in the sedge?
Will they take the deer path, follow
tracks lost in the tangled trees,
or will they find the grassy hollow
where my hare rests? Hide him, please!
I hear the hounds’ wild crying,
voices urging, find the prey,
a russet flash, hooves flying,
of the deer that got away.
When silence falls, jay keeping
watch calls out in thankful praise;
somewhere a hare is sleeping
beneath the Good Ones’ watchful gaze.
I do love a hare poem, Jane, and a quadrille to boot! Yours reminds of a hare I saw a couple of months ago. I especially love that the trees made shadows green, and the hare left his shape in the grass. But oh, the gunshot and the belling of the hounds make me so angry!
Thank you, Kim. Yes, I’m furious for six months of the year. The quadrille is just a part of the poem. It needs a longer form. (no pun intended).
Oh dear hare, beware
the hunters, hounds
the deadly sounds
run fast, dear hare
run, fast be spared.
If they stay in the woods, they’re reasonably safe, but if the dogs flush them out into the meadows, it’s a different story.
The shift from early morning peace to the sound of the hunt – you really show us the dissonance. I love hares. Nobody should hunt them.
All through the autumn and winter it goes on. Bloody violence. hares are beautiful and magical and the men who shoot them are boorish, brainless slobs.
How terrible! Poor hares.
They do no harm to anything. There’s no reason to kill them at all.
Run, little hare. Don’t let them catch you. 😦
–Shay
That’s what I always wish 😦
I like the light and life of the first stanza and how it contrasts with the chaos and death of the second. I’m guessing you wish you had a place to give sanctuary to the hare.
Thank you. You can’t save them. Hares need space and even if they’re on our land, if they saw one, they’d shoot. I just hate the whole thing. It’s senseless violence.
You’re welcome. I understand. It’s like that with the deer here. The hawks seem to get most of the rabbits.
If they’re after something that will fight back like boar or red deer they go out in big numbers taking no chances. The little things like hares they pop off at all the time.
I love to watch the hare in my back yard… and I love knowing that he is safe as long as he stays with me!
They are beautiful creatures. I wish they did stay put.
The beauty of wold life and the Beast that is man. (K l
Hares, deer, foxes, you name it, they are all more beautiful than the lumbering morons who kill them.
No contest.
I know who I’d throw out of the balloon.
That ring after shots fired. A poignant image and moment captured in such few words.
Thank you. It deserves a longer poem. I always try to shoehorn something long into a quadrille. Not the idea really.
You’re welcome. I love the morsel that is the quadrille, but I agree, sometimes it’s not enough.
Perhaps the problem is, when you start to write a poem, you don’t know how long it’s going to be. The number of lines sometimes, depending on the form, but the number of words fits into the other limits of the form, they’re not the form itself.
It’s a beautiful scene spoilt by men with guns and dogs doing their bidding.
They’re at it all the time.
They are evil.
Can’t disagree with that.
No 😯
😦
😟
The beauty of the beginning –I love the hare’s shape left in the grass–and the horror of the end is such a contrast. That hare is beautiful.
I don’t think we have hares here. We had lots of rabbits about this summer, but they’ve vanished (maybe to hawks), but I never see them in the winter.
Thank you.
Your jack rabbits I think are the same family as the European hare.
You’re welcome.
We have “regular” rabbits here. I think jack rabbits are out west.
🙂
That’s an interesting use of the prompt word. I like it. I hear those gunshots.
Life is safer in the briar patch. Well done.
Thank you. Yes, only dogs will ever burrow into a briar patch and a nice tangled one will discourage most of them.