Haiku challenge: Super & Strange

For Ronovan’s weekly haiku challenge. I have used super in the Latin sense of above, and unexpected for strange. The form is gogyohka, a new one to me, like a tanka but without the syllable restrictions, one phrase per line.

 

crow wings stretch

above the red sunset glow

unexpected messengers

from beyond the horizon

from beyond this world

 

Haiku challenge: Evergreen first snow

I’m going to post a lot today because it’s my birthday and I’ll post if I want to. First up, a couple of cold, cold haiku for Frank Tassone’s challenge, one I never seem to see.

 

First snow settles on

evergreen, everdark firs—

white colder than black.

 

In the dim dark woods,

first snow, cold ghost drifts, whisper,

pure white, nevergreen.