A promenade in haiku

 

I climb the hill

still no closer

to the swallows

 

in the lane

the stain of fallen plums

waits for cleansing rain

 

in the hedge

sloes colour of an august

midnight

 

civic duty

helping snails

across the main road

 

across the valley

north curtains of rain

I turn back south

 

field of corn

mimics the sound

of falling rain

 

pointed wing-shadow

it has been a good year

for kestrels

 

home field

golden

with welcome

Autumn afternoon

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Walking through the city, in my hand the keys to the house in the countryside.

Not the big barn door key, an antique almost the length of my forearm but the house door and the veranda door. We need spares cutting.

The air is hot, sky blue, and the key-cutter hums to himself.

Even the traffic lazes along, slow and steady.

I jaywalk across the boulevard, up to the triumphal arch and beyond to the cathedral square, where a mime artist, spray-painted gold, jerks into movement and a guy falls off his bicycle in surprise. The Spanish punks with their sleeping dogs laugh, but on the whole, nobody notices.

Past the town hall and the cobbles, fishscaled and uneven, along the railings of the municipal gardens and the art gallery to the park, resin-scented and dappled with hot sunlight, where two policemen are arguing with a young guy sitting on the back of a bench with his feet on the seat. But nothing is happening, the boy sits and the other policeman watches the girls in the café opposite. Then the older policeman huffs and puffs and they get back on their bicycles. The air is too hot and calm and peaceful to make a fuss.

The shopping mall is a hideous sixties pile, built when there was a lot of money for big projects, but maybe not much of it went the architect’s way because the result looks like a heap of old Daleks and giant leggo blocks stuck with beach pebbles to remind us, I suppose, that somewhere quite close is the ocean. But inside the concrete pebble-dashed bunker, there is quiet, no music and no crowds. I need a frying pan to take to the new house, and some Italian cheese, because shops in the countryside are sparse and Italian cheese will be a luxury. The boy at the checkout is getting everything wrong and the women at the next tills, older and maternal, laugh and help him out. The queue gets longer, but nobody seems in a hurry.

Walking home, the air is hot and lazy and the pines chatter with children going home from school and the shadows are a little longer.

I walk in the golden light falling, down the street that says Cours d’Albret on the nineteenth century enamel plaque, and Cours Messidor engraved in the stone beneath, reminding me that this city was once the seat of revolutionaries, and I wonder if they were as sleepy as we are now.

In the hot autumn light, gold and pine-scented, the city has a friendly, comfortable feel. But the keys jingle jangle in my bag and the song they are singing is of cool stone and trees where orioles warble, shading a stream, and morning light falling through open shutters onto a small piece of terracotta-flagged floor that my feet will tread gently back and forth until I make it my own.

Humming a tune

For the Secret Keeper’s weekly writing prompt.

This week’s words are:

WIT – HURT – NOTE – HONEST – TEST

I’m afraid I used ‘whit’ instead of ‘wit’. Once it sneaked in, I couldn’t get rid of it.

Photo©Tony Castle

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You cared not a whit for the hurt,

The test is you never looked back,

You walked away humming a tune.

 

Words echo, so many false notes,

The smile on your face was a mask,

You cared not a whit for the hurt.

 

Your lies should have blackened my heart,

You were honest you’d never have left,

The test is you never looked back.

 

In the tree, a bird sings to the sun,

So much sweeter than memories of when

You walked away humming a tune.