Once I bowed my head with all the rest
Breathed in the scent of incense by the candles’ flickering flame
Fearing death almost as much as I feared life.
Now I raise my face to the rising and the setting sun
And wonder at the silver light of the moon
And how it soothes the ugliness out of every scar.
Instead of tuneless soulless words
Chanted beneath a sky purged of mystery and the deep unknown
I let my soul soar on the wings of the blackbird’s song
Into the morning where every hue of feather and petal and leaf is born.
And when it is time for night to fall
I will fade into the soft darkness between the stars
With the song of the blackbird rippling in my ears.
Beautiful words 🙂
Thank you 🙂
Absolutely stunning piece!
I’m glad it struck a chord with you, Mishka 🙂
Haunting and beautiful…
I’m glad you liked this one. In fact I thought you might 🙂
Wrapped in the balm of nature – fortunate poet.
I always thought Manley Hopkins was barking up the wrong tree, but he was a convert and they tend to be a little bit…exalted.
He was the bane of my Leaving Cert year Jane but these days I’m more inclined to his stuff. Youth wasted on the young eh.
I actually loved the images in his poetry, still do. I just hated the way he brought God into it. Still do, only more so.
Oh Jane. Such a gift you have, and thanks for sharing with us. This line “I let my soul soar on the wings of the blackbird’s song” not the bird but it’s song, just beautiful. I loved the images of the moons silvery light soothing the ugliness of scars. Very nice Jane.
I’m glad you liked the poem, Lockie. I’m going to bore people rigid eventually with blackbirds and moonlight, but they do lend themselves to lovely imagery 🙂