Sacha’s prompt this week, a time limit rather than word limit prompt, is pretty unlikely, but for once, I managed to do it. Not in 120 seconds, but less than four minutes, mainly because I can’t stop myself correcting spellings and typos as I go. Anal, I know, but there you are.
Anyway, the theme was Blowtorch and this is my 120 second (and a bit), stream of consciousness story.
It looks a bit like an oil can. Not that I’ve ever taken much notice of what George knackles away at in his shed. Men’s stuff. He’d have put a lock on the door if he’d ever dreamed I’d come in here and disturb him. Well, first time for everything. He’s left bits of metal lying everywhere—on his workbench, on the floor. You can’t see to tell the truth in here for the filth over the window. A bit of a tidy up won’t go amiss either. I pick up the battered can thing. It’s warm as if he’s just been using it. Wonder what it does? I turn it to look down the spout thing and press on the—
Oh no!
I’m afraid so 😦
Oooops!
She won’t do that again in a hurry 🙂
No, I guess not!
Love it. Knackle? Fab word. And it was too dark to tell the truth? Spot on. Brilliant write
Haha! You picked out two expressions that aren’t mine. Knackling was a word my mum picked up from God knows where, probably Yorkshire, and being too dark to see the tell the truth was one of my father-in-law’s and I don’t know where he got it from.
Great expressions – and it takes a writer’s ear to pick up on them and tuck them away for future use. Nicely done 🙂
Thank you 🙂
🙂
Oh dear! Singed eyebrows?
I hope that was all.
Ouch!
Oh that was NASTY! Sacha will love it Hehe! 😂😂😂
She’d probably rather it was the other way round—useless hubby playing around with his wife’s blowtorch.
Haha! That’s probably true!
Oh my gosh! What an ending.
I tell my children not to play with papa’s tools 🙂