Ripeness

A very short one for the dverse prompt.

Ripeness

The vendange is over,
the first pressing of grape juice,
(since we can’t have water this dry year)
fermenting now in cask, in vat,
on the vine for the birds to steal,
punch-drunk in this October sun.

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Jane Dougherty

I used to do lots of things I didn't much enjoy. Now I am officially a writer. It's what I always wanted to be.

17 thoughts on “Ripeness”

  1. This was so comfortably engaging Jane. Living in this wine region of eastern Lake Washington, I have personally encountered the essence your piece here — wonderful my friend. 🙂✌🏼❤️

    1. The birds seem very particular about what they’ll eat. I read that dogwood berries were great favourites with most species, but they won’t touch them at all in these parts.

  2. The local vineyards here in Sussex think it’ll be one of the best ever years for white wine because of the hot summer. Apparently the lack of rain enhances the sugars also.

    1. They were talking about it here. Some of the champagne houses are thinking of buying English vineyards. Even in the Champagne region it was too hot this year to make very good wine.

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