For Colleen’s ekphrastic prompt, view from my window. The form is one I’m using often at the moment, a Fibonacci sequence of syllables arranged in a trimeric form.
This is all
This is all there is, this meadow,
dandelion gold,
woven stalks
in green.
Dandelion-gold
tapestry
mimics
woven stalks,
where hares
hide
in green
wild
nests.
Words from the poemetry unit
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Clever format. I am such a fan of dandelions, so this brought a smile!!
Thank you! I love dandelions. They brighten up every lawn 🙂
I love the form you have used, it fits so well with the words and the shape reminds me of a flower lovely 🙌
Thank you! You’re right, I hadn’t noticed that, but the poem does look like a flower on a leafy stem.
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This is lovely!
Thank you!
You are welcome.
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Truly a field of gold. (K)
It’s beautiful.
So beautifully descriptive
Thank you xxx
Lovely, Jane. I love dandelions, too.
You’ve got me hooked on this form, as well. 🙂
🙂
I saw you’d used it. I’m glad. It would be strange if you didn’t get on with it though 🙂
It would.(Even if it is inspired by a math sequence. )🙂
At a wild guess I’d say you are as great at maths as I am 🙂
Haha! Numbers make my eyes glaze over.
Mine too. Of course 🙂
🙂
I like this form Jane. I’ll have to give it a try. Your view is stunning!
I find this variation of the Fibonacci form addictive. You can count words or syllables, and the numbers can increase or decrease. Adding the repeated lines of the trimeric gives it a bit more interest.
Do you have the link where you explain the form? Thanks Jane. I really like this one too.
It was Marian Christie who introduced me to the Fibonacci poem https://marianchristiepoetry.net/mathematical-forms-in-poetry-the-fibonacci-poem/
I can’t find her poem that inspired me to have a go, but it merges the Fibonacci with the trimeric .
I love your poem, Jane! It show the simplicity and beauty of the field.
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
Thank you! I like this form. It makes you pare away all the unnecessary words.
A breath of fresh air… beautiful. 😊
Thank you!
It is all and it is enough. Lovely write, Jane, and glad to see you at Tanka Tuesday ❤
Thanks Lisa xxx
I rarely look in. Question of time. Sometimes though, I can’t resist 🙂
You’re most welcome and understand the time element.
It’s more a question of commenting on the other poems than writing one myself. WP doesn’t let me comment on or like most posts, and for those it does, I have to log in each time. It takes forever.
I HEAR YOU on the WP glitches. I have to do the same 😦
It feels like such a drain on time!
It is. I’m slowly cutting back on commenting 😦
I often don’t have anything constructive to say anyway…
Any feedback shows support. I’ve noticed a concerning trend with just likes and no comment. I’ll take comments any day over likes.
I’m guilty of that, if WP lets me leave a like, which is rare. Sometimes I’d just like to say that I’ve read the poem but I don’t have anything to say about it. Yes, I appreciate comments that are relevant to the poem, but when it’s just trading ‘nice things to say about one another’s poem’ it doesn’t really mean much.
Different folks different strokes.