This odd and dark little poem came to me last night as I was taking Finbar for his final outing up and down the lane at 11pm. There was a bit of a moon, the stars, and it was still light on the western horizon. There in never any traffic on this lane at night. We get maybe half a dozen cars go past all day. Just the neighbours.
I like walking at night when it’s still light enough to see. There are rabbits and hares, sometimes martens, deer and fox. And lots of owls. It’s their place, not ours. I keep Finbar on his lead so he doesn’t disturb them. It isn’t wilderness, just small holdings and woodland, but it doesn’t belong to people, no matter what they say, and however close they shave their lawns.
Jilly’s Jim Harrison quote for the days of unreason challenge seems quite appropriate.
โHis mindโs all black thickets and bloodโย ย from Songs of Unreason
It must be hard to be
a rabbit, said the child,
to hide beneath the hedge the day
for fear of man and running dog,
the shadow of the hawk,
to tremble night time at the sound
of hunting owl, the moonlit fox.
Rabbit listened sadly,
wept for the gentle child,
said, Life is hard for timid folk,
but little one, youโll find
that unlike you, we’ve naught to fear
from our own kin and kind.
The ending gave me a chill. It’s so true. Maybe it’s always been true.
I think it probably has.
Which isn’t really comforting.
As a species, we are a complete mess.
Nicely said. Smart guy.
There’s more sense in a stupid rabbit than in a lot of clever people.
So who’s stupid now?
I’d never call a rabbit stupid, it was just a metaphor ๐
I know, silly.
You write extensively about animals, how can you?!
It would be difficult…
Jane- this is so lovely.
I love watching the rabbits, and since they’ve been round exterminating the foxes they are no longer just fox food, they’re little lawn mowers ๐
How marvelous for you Jane!
I live in a privileged environment. Dog agrees too ๐
I see bunnies from time to time and coyotes as well. Right now, there is a lot of building going on near us, which always displaces the little critters. Plus, it’s been unusually dry. About a month ago, 3 mountain lions were spotted in a nearby neighborhood!
Have fantastic! I hope they leave them alone!
Thankfully, I’ve heard of no kills.
Crossing fingers that continues.
Yes, me too.
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So true, like a little fairy tale.
As you wrote, you are really living in the paradise. Here – in a very rural environment ๐ – only hear cars, cars ….
Have a great weekend. Michael
The lack of cars was one of the main reasons we came here. I hate them.
My full consent Jane!
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a thoughtful, crepuscular poem – for some reason this prompt brought out the rabbit in Charley & I too
I’ll have a read. I wonder why that was? Not really obvious.
Oooh. “weโve naught to fear from our own kin and kind” well, yes, that’s the worst part, right?
I can’t imagine a rabbit shoah somehow.
Lovely wisdom! โค
Rabbits know more than we give them credit for ๐
Sad, and even more sadly true ๐๐๐
We are cruel even to one another.
Yes we are๐๐
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Sad, but lovely. I feel like it’s you talking to one of your children. It’s so gentle while delivering the truth.
There are a lot of rabbits about at the moment, dozens of them all over the grass, in the lane, everywhere, and it’s because they’ve had a systematic hunt of the the foxes. Soon they’ll be saying there are too many rabbits and they’ll be gunning them down too. We are just so illogical in our cruelty. I’m glad my children have learned that much.
It’s crazy.
I haven’t seen too many rabbits about here this spring. They do seem to go in cycles.
Maybe next year there’ll be more foxes and fewer rabbits…
I guess you’ll just have to wait and see! ๐
I’ll wait ๐
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A sad reminder of human failings…..When was the last time we observed 2 rabbits at loggerheads? A great poem ๐
Thanks Vivian ๐
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Okay, WOW! That last line, MInd blowing! I, too have felt this way, How hard it is must be for an animal to live without all the sophistication we have under our command, but maybe we are the ones who lack what they truly cherish? God I love your poems. If I may, I want to get some feedback from you for my last poem. It has been a while, so I don’t know how I did it! https://onegreatfantasy.com/fabricated-dragon-hide/
I don’t imagine they ever question. Their lives are short and full of danger, but they have some certitudes too. I’ll have a look at your poem.
Thank you! Maybe, but aren’t they more connected to nature? Maybe their life is short, but doesn’t it make it more precious? I would assume this is how the conversation between a human and God would go, much like between an Animal and a human respectively!
Yes, I agree, that we have lost most of what connected us to nature. We try to recapture it, and I think that meditation and spiritual searching is a way of making up for what we have lost. Some would say it takes us deeper into ourselves and gives us something nature never could. I don’t know. In your idea, who would be Godโthe rabbit or the child?
Oh my Jane! I love this so much! โค๏ธ
I wish all children could feel as safe in their homes as rabbits do ๐
Yes! โค๏ธ
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Accepting what is…so hard for us humans. Haunting. (K)
We find it hard to accept our flaws. They are so glaring, but we prefer to dwell on the possibility of good.
I love it
Thank you!
you are wellcome
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You’re my favorite rabbit princess
Aw thank you ๐ I’ve just been out with Finbar to say coucou les lapins. They just look at him with complete disdain Can’t even be arsed to run away.
Haha! My mom says the same thing! I have this brilliant image of Finbars forlorn look!
He either pretends he can’t see them or when they race under his nose he looks the other way, but as soon as a cat appears, the hunter is back. He’s really terrified of cats.