My WIP is at the waiting to see if it passes muster stage, but this photo is so much a part of the story that I can’t help but write a bit that fits it. Thanks Sue 🙂 It’s even entitled ‘The Mirror’.
Evienne stands by the pool in the river bend for the last time. She is old now, too old to have the strength to stir the memories, too old to remember the names of all the faces. There is only one she remembers with love anyway, and his face has fled from this pool. It lies now in a distant pool, over the sea, and even though the barrier of mist magic around the island is failing, as the magic of its seers dies, it is still too strong for a woman who is now only a woman, to pierce with only women’s magic.
She would have left his place, her lake island and the meanders of the river Wye, while she was still strong, and followed Richard’s shade to his resting place, but she had not the heart to deprive the red-haired woman of that privilege. She, after all, had almost twenty years of Richard, bore him three daughters. The red-haired woman’s was the lot of all mortal women, loss and grieving. Evienne had left her Richard’s shade, and when she died, avenged her death, and let her shade go in peace to find Richard and their son.
She is old now, and her turn will soon come. Her daughters are scattered like autumn leaves but at least two of the last birthing, Richard’s daughters, have known happiness as few mortal women ever do. The youngest is waiting for her, in the depths or the heights, perhaps both.
It is time for her to leave, to wade back across the lake to the island and pull the mists about it for the last time. She turns from her contemplation of the still pool that mirrors only the sky, and finds that she still has tears to shed.
I don’t know about ‘passing muster’, Jane…but this one left me in tears.
It was a time when I suppose nobody expected to be ‘happy’, not among the Normans anyway, but I’m sure Richard de Clare came close.
I think the expectation of happiness as a right is a fairly modern invention… but access to it has always been open to all, just not always all the time.
Taking boys away from their mothers while they were still children (English public school system perpetuated it) and bringing them up in an all male, militaristic environment must have taught them to despise anything that wasn’t virile, and that emotions were sentimentality. I’m sure you’re right that some of them must sometimes have been made happy by other things than winning battles etc but it’s hard to imagine!
An unbalanced education has a lot to answer for… for both sexes.
It certainly does. Talk about getting off to a bad start.
It gives us a mountain to climb early on…
Eton = child abuse.
Beautiful Jane 💜
Thanks, Willow 🙂
This hits so raw ❤ What a wonderful job on the prompt!
Thank you! I’m glad you got the emotion without knowing the backstory.
What vivid images of a long life and it’s emotional pulls. Heartbreaking. (K)
She is a completely fictional character, but she must have existed. Some woman had his children even if nothing is known of her.
There are days when I feel like this woman, when I can almost see the bridge that waits for me. Endings are always a little sad…
Endings and letting go of people you love is so hard.
Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
Thank you for reblogging 🙂
Love it, Jane! Thanks to Sue, were i found the link to this, i lost in the past. Michael
I’m pleased you enjoyed it 🙂
Wonderful Jane! I am very intested in the WIP, when its ready.
I’ll post as soon as I know anything 🙂
Thank you in advance, Jane!
🙂