For the #writephoto challenge. Into the final furlong with my WIP. I’m dreading finishing it. Thanks for another fitting photo, Sue.
“I never did see one o’ them bird monsters. I watched, every time the tide flowed in and the mists rolled over the trees. I heard ’em though.” Halli looked curiously at Jon. “Where did they go?”
Jon shrugged, his eyes on the green line of hills along the horizon. “Probably with the fish ghosts and all that other crap. Maybe back into the ocean. Maybe we’ll meet one when we take the boat out.”
Halli gave him that look, part scornful, part commiserating. “You think you ken everything, don’t you Jónsi Edvardsson? I told you, I heard ’em an’ I felt their great wings beating, but you can’t see nowt in the mists. You know that.”
“They’ve gone,” he said gently. “I think they were shades calling to the shades in the Mistlands. It’s all gone now. Peaceful.” He gazed across the blue to the distant island. “Like the ocean.”
Halli looked too, and Jon knew she was trying not to cry. “I hope Jussi’s mate, Gieri was with ’em.”
He put his arm round her and drew her close. The wind was cold and salt-sticky. Gulls yelled as they skimmed the waves. “Sure he did. I watched them go.”
Halli laid her head on his shoulder. “I could watch this sky forever. I’d stay here if I thought it was the right place, but that’s where I’m off.” She pointed across the water. “Skies’ll be even brighter over there. We’ll find what we’re looking for in the Heartlands. You too, Jónsi.”
Jon didn’t reply. He was as certain as if a voice was telling his story aloud, that the end of his journey was not the Heartlands. His and Halli’s destinations were not the same. He pulled a lock of hair away from her cheek and kissed away the tear.
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The threads are pulling tighter. I can feel those tears. (K)
I’m determined that this story is going to have a happy ending.
Oh yes, Jane! There is so much romance there. Let it be a Happy End. Michael
I finished it yesterday and it has a happy ending 🙂
Wonderful! :-))
🙂
There’s heartache in there, waiting… I hope it is not too hard on them.
There are several heartaches but I think I’ve given it a happy ending. It’s finished now.
Then I hope you have raised a nice glass of something to celebrate 🙂
Not yet. I don’t know whether it’s any good. I set it in Birstall. It wanders away with the fairies obviously, but it was Birstall I had in my mind’s eye.
Then I’ll definitely be reading it when it is ready 😉
You can read it now if you like. It might never go any further than my computer.
It needs to!
I think it’s a good read, but I’m biased 🙂
It looks it from the bits I’ve read 🙂
I’m crossing my fingers my agent likes it.
I’ll keep mine crossed too 🙂
Cheers 🙂