I’m preparing this post in advance, as I am the next challenge, because I won’t have time to do the round up tomorrow. Book release aside, we are signing for our new (very old) house just after lunch, and as we intend to go straight out to look at our purchase and christen it, I’ll be spending tomorrow morning packing our camping gear. If anyone posts an entry on Tuesday, I promise I’ll do an update when I get back to civilization and internet access.
The first entry is from Patricia Salamone. It isn’t a pantoum and Patricia says she’s not a poet. I leave you to judge.
WASHED UP ON THE SHORE
By: Patricia Salamone
Washed upon the shore from far away,
or have you been resting here for many a day.
No matter where you come from you bring a story with you.
Did you come from deep below the sea,
or did you travel here from where I would like to be.
No matter where you come from you bring a story with you.
Did a small child pick you up and plop you here one day,
so another child can pick you up and take you off to play.
No matter where you come from you bring a story with you.
You feel so warm beneath my feet and smooth in my palm,
when I come here again you will probably be gone.
No matter where you come from you bring a story with you.
If I pick you up and take you home with me,
will you tell me your story or will your story be me.
No matter where you come from you bring a story with you.
Next was Sarah from the south west with a lovely evocation of memories of playing on the beach with a child.
Pebbles – a Pantoum | fmme writes poems
Ken’s poem is full of longing for a world where uniqueness and difference is treasured. Maybe, one day.
Like Pebbles on the Sand | rivrvlogr
Merril’s poem is in true ballad style, wishing on a blue stone, wild geese and hopes for a better world.
Stone of Peace | Yesterday and today: Merril’s historical musings
Sri’s poem plays on the words ‘collect’ and ‘recollect’, gathering memories like pebbles on the beach.
Kerfe’s ocean washes the reader to the margins of time, a tremendous image, bouncing back and forth in a litany of contrasts.
In the Margins of Time | method two madness
Kat’s poem offers a much more interesting alternative to sunbathing
Treasure Bound | like mercury colliding…
This one is from TJ, the Australian Parisien, who creates what seems to me, a delightful paradox with his beach butterfly, flitting about turning stones, in a search for happiness.
Leave No Stone Unturned | La vie est trop courte pour boire du mauvais vin
There’s a sense of melancholy in Janice’s poem. Beauty is there, solid as polished stones, but she feels that something eludes her grasp. Beauty isn’t as so easy to capture.
Peter. Another one apologizing for not writing a pantoum. It isn’t an obligation, just a suggestion. I like this image, the pebble, that has taken so long to be polished, then washed ashore, forever hidden beneath the waves.
Louise’s poem uses the pebbles in another function, a path leading to dreams, happiness, the sky. A poem full of movement and light.
Ocean Lullaby – Fantasy Raconteur
There you are. Polished gems, all of them. Thank you all for participating. I’m posting next week’s challenge a little ahead of time since I won’t have internet access on Wednesday, so you’ll have an extra day to polish 🙂
I really have to apologize. I was distracted and forgot to post to my word press page. I posted it today and as I have mentioned I am not a poet but thanks to all of you I now know what Pantoum is. Wonderful poems. :o)
http://www.salpa58.wordpress.com/Washed Up On The Shore
Wil add it to next week’s list now 🙂
A nice beginning to my day, being transported to the ocean again.
Good luck with the house! (K)
Thanks! We’ll be needing lots of luck with this one.
Another wonderful group of poems. Thanks, Jane! Good luck with your house and paper signing. (And, of course, watch out for the evil, otherworldly real estate agents! ) 🙂
Yeah. To ALL of that.
Very best wishes for your book and your new abode! May your books sell like hot cakes and your house be filled with joy, love and friendship! 🙂
Thanks. I’m just quivering with apprehension about everything still.
A fine collection. Thank you.
My pleasure 🙂
Pebble treasures Jane …wonderful set of poems…all the best to you for tommorow
Thanks Sri 🙂
Pleasure Jane
Hi, Jane, all the very best for your busy (exciting) week – hope all goes well and look forward to seeing you posting soon.
Getting very bogged down, I’m afraid. Ah well.