The dverse prompt, is to play with the senses.
Touch the misty breath of morning,
tangy with the steely taste of dew,
and stroke the back of river flowing,
curling ’neath the bridge piers striding.
Draw me a cloudburst drenched in rainbow darts,
and I’ll blow you kisses through the slate grey shade.
Sing me all the blackbird’s songs,
if you dare!
and I’ll reply with moonlight tangos,
strummed on a hazel branch.
Pluck me an apple with skin as smooth as oceans,
and I’ll breathe you mint and rosemary,
rock you in the scent of roses,
until the evening falls, soft as moth wings,
bee-humming with the joy of young things,
in a cascade of heavenly blue.
Words as colourful as the image!
Thank you, Peter 🙂
A beautiful play with the senses Jane, I especially love ‘stroke the back of river flowing’ :o)
Thank you 🙂 That’s because stroking a back or a head or silky ears is a dog person’s gesture 🙂
😉 xxx
Your word-mastery humbles me, Jane. This is beyond beautiful!
Your compliment humbles me, Beverly! It’s sort of stream of consciousness poetry 🙂
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Wonderful words corresponding perfect with the image, Thx. 😉
Thank you! Franz Marc is a painter I am especially fond of 🙂
Wow, divinely amazing ~ I specially admire:
Pluck me an apple with skin as smooth as oceans,
and I’ll breathe you mint and rosemary
Thank you Grace! I like this no holds barred style of poetry.
Delightful wordplay Jane…a song for the senses.
Thank you, Paul 🙂
We in some ways wrote about similar things..music, night, blackbirds, moonlight.
I like the rainbow darts.
Thank you 🙂 I’m just logging back in. Will get to yours shortly 🙂
Excellent play, Jane! One day, this could be a classic.
Thank you, Ken! I enjoy letting the words romp.
Love love LOVE those
“moonlight tangos,
strummed on a hazel branch.”
Thank you! It’s easy to let the words do the strumming 🙂
Perfect wordplay – a love of love.
Anna :o]
Thanks Anna. That’s about it 🙂
This is so incredibly bewitching 😀 especially love; “Pluck me an apple with skin as smooth as oceans, and I’ll breathe you mint and rosemary.” Beautifully rendered.
Thank you, Sanaa 🙂 I’m glad you enjoyed the images.
That is totally intriguing. All those beautiful metaphors, and each one just as the prompt suggested. It is a masterpiece
Thank you Walter! The prompt said, play, so I just let the words loose 🙂
They played very well together
Like good little words 🙂
I like the hypnotic sound of this and how blackbird songs get moonlight tangos.
Thank you, Frank. All singing, all dancing 🙂
Wow I love the vivid images and sounds you create with this one. Brilliant write!
Thank you so much, Delaina!
This is sensory bliss! I enjoyed every line, but I think the image of rocking in the scent of roses is so lovely. Thanks for joining in, Jane.
Thanks for the lovely prompt, Mish. I enjoy letting rip like this 🙂
Love the ocean skin of apples… great poetry Jane
Thank you, Björn, I’m glad you like this one.
I love the misty breath of morning, Jane – best time of the day – and ‘tangy with the steely taste of dew’ is perfect. I also love the lines:
‘Draw me a cloudburst drenched in rainbow darts,
and I’ll blow you kisses through the slate grey shade’.
Thanks Kim. Yes, it’s my favourite time of day too, when everyrthing is still a bit hazy and misty, and the sounds are clear without the daytime rumble.
“Evening falls, soft as moth’s wings.” It’s all gorgeous, Jane, but this line stays with me. Just perfect!
Thank you, Sarah 🙂 I’m so pleased you like this one.
Love this, Jane. Such a beautiful stream of consciousness/waltz through color and the senses. You really got me with your line on the blackbird’s song. Stunning 🙂
Thank you, Ryan—I love blackbirds too 🙂
You’re most welcome. Just beautiful 🙂
🙂
While so lyrically apt in its sensory assay, there is something abstract to the palate, a dominant visual. Maybe this is how synethesiacs experience the organum of love.
I wonder? It must be a wonderful gift to have that added dimension of colour with the other perceptions.
I’d like to think so to, but gifts usually are curled with more than a few mad edges. Dragons lie beyond … do synethesiacs suffer a form of agorophobia staring at a field of wildflowers?
I imagine that cashiers in a supermarket would either go nuts, or find something special in their job their co-workers don’t see.
A sensory delight, Jane! It’s filled with beautiful words and images.
Thank you, Merril 🙂
“Strummed on a hazel branch” was a delightful surprise!
I try to slip in a little mythology where I can 🙂
Beautiful imagery here.
Thank you Sascha 🙂