I must remember to add the source poem. This is another piece from ‘To some I have talked with by the fire’.
“…till the morning break
And the white hush end all but the loud beat
Of their long wings, the flash of their white feet.” W.B. Yeats
The ineffable host
In the rushy wind we hear them,
In the voices of the night.
They answer the hesitant moonlight
With laughter, sharp and white.
They ride the horses of darkness
Across the midnight plain,
And they snatch away our dreamings
And leave us only pain.
The fairy folk are riding,
For spurs, the north wind’s bite,
And the morning seems so far away,
No help in the moon’s frail light.
They are gone in the swoop of the screech owl,
With the dying of the night,
Taking their pale, white beauty,
Far from our mortal sight.
The line fits with something that was already fluttering in my head. Back to read in a bit. Thank you, Jane!
Fluttering being the operative word 🙂 See ya!
Wonderfully atmospheric 🙂
Thanks Peter 🙂
Love all the Yeatsian imagery!
Thank you! It’s hard to climb out if it once you fall in.
I’m sure! There are worse fates.
Imagine getting caught up in the coils of William McGonagall http://www.mcgonagall-online.org.uk/ if you haven’t had the pleasure of his acquaintance.
Yes, indeed! 🙂
This one is wonderful …. full of the right textures and oozing Yeatsian quality
I’m glad you like this one. I thought it was time for a bit of fairy host rhyming.
love the imagery, Jane 🙂
https://ladyleemanilablog.wordpress.com/2017/11/04/a-month-with-yeats-day-four/
Thank you!
Magical, Jane!
I hope to get back to this later today. I have to force myself to do some work now.
The almost-full moon was humming this morning. . . .
Deafening!
🙂
Your poem, a captivating tale…mirroring Yeats…one of my favourite lines: ‘for spurs, the North wind’s bite’
Thanks Janice. It is a tale, you’re right 🙂
Seems I’m not the only one chanelling the Yeatsian obsession with the Danann! I love how you evoke such a mysterious mood with your rapt images!
Here’s my latest:
https://frankjtassone.wordpress.com/2017/11/04/a-tanka-for-a-month-with-yeats-day-four-poetry/
It would be hard to leave the fair folk out of a Yeats inspired collection 🙂
True!
Love how the bite of the north wind serves as spurs! The rhythm of this falls in with the ride.
Thank you 🙂 I thought we were due for a rhyming poem.
Here is the pingback for my day 4 post : https://wp.me/p73yZZ-3Jx
Gloriously dripping in Yeats. 🌹
I imagine this is the kind of thing he was writing when he was a school…
No much better than that Jane 🌹
It’s nice of you to say so 🙂
Well you do yourself down 💜💜
I think I’m doing pretty well to even post a poem claiming to be inspired by Yeats! I set high standards, that’s all 🙂
Yes I can see that 💜
🙂
Love your poem, Jane. The dark side of faerie lore – very Yeatsian. Some sharp imagery here.
I’m glad you like it. The fairy folk we’re necessarily nice, were they?
Not at all. We’ve added sequins and sugar coating to some dark stories.
Disneyfied.
Oh! and here is mine:
https://fmmewritespoems.wordpress.com/2017/11/04/november-with-yeats-4/
Got it 🙂
“No help in the moon’s frail light” I hear hoofbeats….
You probably did. They’re out there…
I went light, but magical. Fairy tale, instead of fairy folk. 🙂
https://merrildsmith.wordpress.com/2017/11/04/swan-prince-yeats-challenge-day-4/
And the effect is magical. Sorry to be so late getting round to my messages. Everything’s running late today.
Thank you. I didn’t post this till late afternoon yesterday (my time). And I’m all off today because we moved the clocks back an hour.
Our clocks/phones went back last week. I have no idea what time of day it is for everyone else now.
🙂
Hello Jane,
Fell asleep on the keyboard and wiped out my original poem…so a quick redo, not at all the dreamy creation I had in mind but it may grow in me…or not. Happy Full Moon to you. Kat
https://katmyrman.com/2017/11/04/counting-shleeeph/
Thanks Kat! I enjoyed your piece of silliness, which wasn’t as silly as all that. Blame it on the moonlight…
Thank you Jane…and the muse. 😊
🙂
Reblogged this on Die Erste Eslarner Zeitung – Aus und über Eslarn, sowie die bayerisch-tschechische Region!.
Cheers!
Great! Remembers me on the bible, the apocalypse. Very athmospheric. Thx! Have a nice sunday. 😉 Michael
Not the apocalypse, just the fair folk passing by 🙂 Have a wonderful day 🙂
Jane, this is wonderful. I did not have time to read this morning as I was busy running around doing weekend chores. If I would have read this before, I would not have posted mine today as I was in a hurry.
I’m glad you like it. I have the advantage that I know in advance which lines I’ll post. There’s never a rush. You can post a reply any time and I’ll see it.
Hi Jane I am running so late these last few days and I don’t see much chance of making up time in the days to come either!
Then I notice my Pingbacks are not showing up? So here is yesterday’s post. Have a good day 💜💜
https://willowdot21.wordpress.com/2017/11/04/a-month-with-yeats-day-4/
I’m just logging in so maybe I haven’t approved your pingback yet. If it arrived after I went to bed. I’ll scroll back and see.
Well this is certainly a challenge of a quote! You are carrying the Yeats flame high my dear. This is certainly moody and magical. I love the imagery you evoke! I’m running behind- yesterday I played tour guide to cousins here for the day, but they saw more of Paris than people normally see on a weeks trip! I might have broken their legs slightly with all the walking but everything has its pros and cons! Okay- time to face your challenge now!!!
Thank you! To know Paris you have to be prepared to get out of the tour bus and walk. Preferably dump the tour bus altogether and find a helpful cousin 🙂
I forgot to post a link to mine, oops! It’s too exciting and time is fleeting!
https://deuxiemepeau.blog/2017/11/05/white-night/
Got it 🙂
With the Oracle’s help
https://methodtwomadness.wordpress.com/2017/12/10/hush/
She has been smitten, just as we have.