It’s procrastination Monday, so here are a few haiku for Carpe Diem’s revise a haiku spot. The haiku are by Sōen Nakagawa. I have revised them and ended with a haiku tying them both together.
one note of the shakuhachi
resounds endlessly
piercing the winter clouds
© Soen Nakagawa
I hear the pipes
and a hill green and purple
echoes winter sky
disappearing
snow on mountain peak
unfurls a Rainbow
© Soen Nakagawa
winter’s cold breath
a rainbow
in the new sun
piped notes
sadness and arched rainbow
of beauty
Jane Dougherty Writes 
Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #4: Jane Dougherty’s latest haiku for Carpe Diem!
Thank you, Frank 🙂
I especially like the second one and the fusion haiku, Jane.
Thanks Ken 🙂
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and again, thanks!
I love the contrast of winter’s cold breath with rainbow. (K)
Thank you 🙂