Another dizain with more swallows, for dverse
When I reach up my hand I touch the sky,
Catch sparks of fire in the dark of night,
As sharp as when the fork-tailed swallows cry
In sleekly feathered meteoric flight,
And gather in my hand the stars’ brief light.
I raise my eyes, watch constellations turn,
And all the lights of heaven slowly burn,
While fox pads silently beneath the trees.
I wonder if he ever feels the stern
Gaze of the night or hears stars in the breeze?
I imagine those foxes are smarter than we realize. I like your description of the lights of heaven slowly burning.
I’m sure you’re right, Frank. Thank you.
I thought I was the only one who hear stars; nice use of the form; love me a fox and a swallow,
Thanks Glenn 🙂
I’m sure he does hear it. I like the line about gathering the starlight in your hand.
Thank you. We assume we are the only creatures to appreciate abstract beauty. We could well be deluding ourselves.
That is true.
Captivating dizain Jane. Well written, excellent read. Wonder ifhe hears stars in the breeze? Like that line…
Thanks Rob 🙂
Yes, he does. I specially love the night when: all the lights of heaven slowly burn,
Thank you 🙂
This dizain is not only lyrical but also very visual, with the hand catching sparks of fire and gathering the light of the stars. My favourite image is the fox – I think foxes see, hear and feel everything in the universe.
Thanks Kim—I think you’re right 🙂
This is so beautiful and accomplished!
Thank you, Rosemary!
This flows so beautifully. The fox definitely knows, better than we do. (K)
Foxes observe, like all animals. Why wouldn’t they look at the stars?