The NaPoWriMo prompt today is a ghazal. I’m the featured poet today, a pleasant surprise!
The path leads into night, when shadows fall,
I take your hand, hold tight, when shadows fall.
The owl swoops through the dark, I hear her call,
Pale wings beat through moonlight, when shadows fall.
A small death in the silence, bitter gall,
Too rapid to take fright, when shadows fall.
So many dangers in the dark befall,
For only stars shed light, when shadows fall.
Cypress boughs stretch, beams of a forest hall,
Filter a gleam, so slight, when shadows fall.
The beauty of the night will never pall,
Though death delights, whenever shadows fall.
Your eyes reflect the stars; I see them all,
On wings, fly there we might, when shadows fall.
Beauty ❤
Thank you 🙂
Loved this. I came across an English ghazal for the first time. It is beautifully crafted.
Thanks Reena 🙂 It doesn’t read much like an oriental ghazal, but then nothing is the same in translation.
Congrats Jane…its more than good to see you as featured poet…
Thank you, Sangbad. It’s hard to concentrate at the moment, so I’m doubly pleased 🙂
I was also at the same condition when my poem got featured on the second day…
by the way posted mine…check it out when you get a chance…
I didn’t realise your poetry had been featured. Congratulations!
Yes…it was title Crow…if you want you can read it here
I had read it and liked it. I didn’t know it was famous though 🙂
oh…yes…wrote it by stealing time from my office work…sitting in the office…I am not satisfied with the poem…still now…
Leave it awhile and go back to it.
okay…thanks Jane…
Very nicely done. Love, I find, is dangerous even when it is beautiful.
Thank you. It’s dangerous if you don’t like the idea of losing yourself.
Congratulations on the feature, Jane, and well done here.
Thanks Ken. I feel as though I deserve a medal just for sitting on this chair. Pulled a back muscle again.
Oww!
Agreed, a magnificent crafting and well done for being the featured writer, extremely deserved my friend!
Thank you!
It is my pleasure dear one xo
I was excited to see that you’re the featured poet today!
The ghazal is lovely.
Thanks Merril. I haven’t written a ghazal in ages.
I haven’t either.
You are the queen of the ghazal. This is wonderful Jane.
I’m glad you liked it, Damien 🙂 It wasn’t as difficult as I remembered it. I’m getting blasé about this rhythm and rhyme thing 🙂
I thoroughly enjoyed your ghazal. 🙂
Thank you, Sue 🙂
This form is so difficult for me…but yours flows. And stars!
Also, a well-deserved feature on NaPoWriMo. (K)
Thanks Kerfe 🙂 It wasn’t as hard as I remembered it. I’ve been through villanelles since I last wrote a ghazal 🙂
Yes, the difficulty of the form seems to inspire you rather than daunt you. The discipline is definitely good for focusing I think.
Some people can be creative in a vacuum. I’m more the kind of person who runs around like a headless chicken until I’m given very firm and absolutely unavoidable deadlines. The ultimate good school pupil 🙂
I agree. I have to give myself some structure, if none has been imposed, in order to accomplish anything.
A genius can make his/her own structure, but the rest of us always do better with a few impositions.
It’s lovely – of course – you are the mistress of subtle repetition. Well deserved feature.
Thanks Sarah 🙂 I do admit to wallowing in refrains.